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poem
ok i wrote this poem, that i think is not very good but people who have read it think it is, so just gimme sum feedback please : ) it isnt important but 13/m
Confusion
Caught in the midst, you're in a daze
Like you were trapped in a giant maze
Confusion comes in all shades of grey
a different one every day,
You do not know, you cannot see
You're stuck in-between and mysteriously,
Your mind will decide what happens next,
And soon you'll be even more perplexed
thanks in advance!
-Connor
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Thats soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good omg you rock.... i suck at poems.
plz rate and dont b mad cuz i said that
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thats a hott poem, lol.. it's really good, especially when you're only 13. and i cant believe a teenage guy can be so deep and poetic. even though you dont think it's very good, i'll bet that everyone else will think it's great!
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that's some awesome stuff there, kid. keep writing, you have talent.
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personally i think it is good. expessially for your age! good job.. on a scale 1-10 ( 10 being the highest) i give it a 9.5
RAT3 M3!!
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Connor-
persionally I think its really good! I have always thought that it was cool to be able to write poetry. I have always tried, but I have never been too good at it! but that poem is quite good, Connor!
Keep up the great work!
-Kel-
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Why don't you think your poem is good? It's great, hun. You did an awesome job at writing it. Wow! I wish I could write as great as you. Keep it up.
♥ Krissy
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