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poetry
Can u help me? i'm a writer but i cant seem to get a poem out (yeah aka writer block)...i was wondering if u could help me by writing a poem for me plz?
i wanna tell my friend, that he can sometimes be fun and crazy and how he isnt always on the sweet and caring side and sometimes can be a complete idiot at some points, without saying that..I also want to get to the point that i may like him as well. Can you help me whip up a poem plz?- THX
(no bad words please :-/)
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First of all, sorry but i'm NOT writing a poem for you. I can help you a little though. First of all, you seem to have a lot of stuff you want to get across, and you dont want the tone to get confusing, so select that first. Do you wanna be funny, or sarcastic, or caring or mysterious? Start by making a point or an observation about what you like about him. Pick something you like physically (but not a cliche)
Then contradit it with the other stuff- remember to keep a good rhythm- if a line is to long then
break it up. Watch
how I'm trying to do it here.
DONT make it explicit you like him, but make it obvious in the tone of the poem. Here, I'll write one (for a girl) and you see if you like it, then nick stuff from it.
I sat and watch you count cards
Watched your eyes flash and dart
Storms in summer.
I don't think you noticed
Noticed me watching
Too enamoured with your centre
Of attention
Of attraction
Of the room in you.
Notice my eyes
Notice me please.
Caring and sweet is a curve.
Note that when you care for all the rest
Crazy care for others
Your summer storms leave me cold
and i miss you.
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