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we are doing a brosure for class on a planet and my planet is mercury and i put "Come and swim the nice beaches of Mercury. It gets very hot so
come and get a nice tan and make sure to bring sunblock too! Make sure to pack for very hot weather. You can go scuba diving, swimming,
surfing, build sand castles, meet a bunch of new people, or just play a simple and fun game of volleyball and hang out with your friends. At
night you can have a fire and roastmarshmellows and relax the night away! This will be a trip you will be sure to never forget! Garenteed.You
can stay at The Beach Front Hotel or The Merc Motel. .. how does that sound to you? I have to have 4 more sentences could someone help me?
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that's really good....but I really can't help you with this subject. I don't really know much about mercury. :(I'm very sorry, but I hope that you do get help. Once again, I'm sorry:(
*Diamyn*
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Well it depends on what grade you're in. If you're in like 7th grade or above, you probably want more facts, like actual temperatures. If you aren't then it sounds good. Not to sound mean or anything, it's just that like teachers on different grades grade differently, you know? You could say like at night, the planet cools down to a whole 600 degrees farenheit!(dont use that number, i just made it up. But if it sounds kinda sarcastic, it'll sound funny. I hope i helped!
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