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Is this good?
Everythings set
No ones home
Liquid on me like a net
Making this dome
Im not turning back
This worlds just not for me
Im starting to pack
I know you wish I could see
This river makes a maze
Up towards me
Im so afraid of this blaze
It flickers in the dark
I dont want to let it go
On my fingers its leaving a mark
But its ok because no one will know
Its falling
I close my eyes
I hear my mom calling
I realize i dont want to say good-bye
I jump up and run so fast
Flames
They all pass
Im almost to the door
But its to late
I fall to the floor
I dont want this to be my fate
I screamed so loud
My bodies burning
Wraping around me like an orange cloud
My skin is turning
I stop breathing
I am almost gone
My bodies seething
My brain stops
Its all over
I finished the plan
My ashes they'll keep in a golden pan
And everyone will see
They'll know i commited a sin
They thought it could never be
I tried, but the flames, they always win
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Thats very sad-trix
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i luv it. it was scary and awesome at the same time. if u have anymore poems please sharew them with me. this one was awesome..keep up the great job..:)
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Nice
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i thought it was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Whoa...... that's really cool, yet scary at the same time. If you have ne more poems plz share them with me. Thanx.
~Chelsea~
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Omg dude that is awsome. I love it. On a scale 1-10 i give u a 10.
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I like it.
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