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just a lil sumin i snapped together lol
I wish I could change I wish I could
I wish I were not the person I am today
I wish I never did the things that I did
I wish I could just be with you right now
I wish You could see how hard I am trying
To be the perfect person you want me to be...
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WOW! Thats a really good poem. I feel like that sometimes thats for sure! And I'm sure many people can! I just love reading poems lol. Keep up the good work and keep posting them!!!
xoxo Kourtney
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wow, thats a GREAT poem
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That is a great poem. Do you have anymore? If you do send them to me in my inbox. I really like it. But maybe you could start off the sentence with a different word, because I and wish over and over again get pretty boring. But anyway it is a good poem.
*Zoe*
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You could do with making this a bit deeper and maybe not starting each line with 'I wish I'. At the moment all this is is a collection of lines.
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