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I need to make a scene for one of my homework assignments and I just don't know were to start. I need help thinking of ideas for a vivid scene that I would do.
Here is what the assignment is asking for:
Now write your own scene with vivid atmosphere - it doesn’t have to be spooky! Limit your scene to no more than three paragraphs. You may use dialogue, if appropriate.
Create a first-person narrator (the main character tells the story using “I”) and imagine a vivid scene for him or her.
Imagine all of the senses involved in your scene---sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch.
Use your narrator’s reaction to the atmosphere to help your reader experience it directly.
Write vivid descriptions using strong nouns and verbs as well as adjectives.
A well-chosen metaphor, simile, allusion, or personification can capture the feeling of a place.
Sometimes describing what isn’t visible is the best way to create atmosphere. Is there a hidden aspect to the place you’ve invented that your reader should know about?
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Imagine your own world, your dream world.
I drummed my fingers while simultaneously tapping my foot against the dirty tile floor. I tried to focus on my school work but my eyes found the imaginary images on my desk much more appeasing. My stomach growled as the smell of greasy, cheesy, ever-so-tasty pizza seeped under the classroom door and wavered right under my nose. I yawned and my head fell back against my shoulders. try something more.
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female
when i masterbate i orgasum but then i have to stop and for some reason i cant go any further because my hands start to ache, but i wotn to keep going so that i cum any help ? :) (link)
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Forget Vibrators, those might be embarrasing (for you) to buy, and if they are try this...
instead of fingering yourself use a pillow to rub yourself against. It sounds silly but it's effective. It's soft and easy. Your hands shouldn't hurt much (: Well...depending on how long you like to go.
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19-female. I think I made a mistake and I honestly don't know how I can fix it. So i'm going to say first off - don't tell me not to do anything, etc. I am 19 years old, I do make good decisions but I just need advice on one thing! So please just answer the question without the preaching. :) I'll return the favor since it may be long ..Thanks!!
So i've had a crush on my friend for about 3 years now. He's honestly the only guy that I can trust. Me and him, we're both attractive to each other, its apparent and we have messed around before if you want to call it that, he's felt me up before .. we flirt nonstop like physically we just have fun with each other but about two years ago is when he first tried really getting with me, like going down my pants and I was like woooaah, it just caught me off guard and so I didn't let him because that was just my first instinct. Me and him basically talk about sex all the time, well when we text it occasionally gets thrown in there somehow! and he's the one who usually brings it up but I feel like he only thinks i'm a tease but i'm not. I was talking to my friend about it and I was like seriously, I NEED him like sexually .. I want to have sex with him and I know he would do it with me but I don't know how to bring it up. She was like... just text him and say FU*K ME!! But I just can't see myself doing that?? And I don't know if he would take me seriously either, because he doesn't think i'd go through with it but I WOULD. What should I do?? How would you go about it? What can I text him saying that would be hot/sexy and make it known that I really do want him?? I can't stop thinking about it.. (link)
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Don't "text" him anything about it. Just hang out like you normally would so it's not all serious and planned. Make sure AT LEAST YOU have a condom, in case it isn't on his mind (because he thinks you dont want to). When you get with him, start slow. He'll eventually get hard, and then you'll have sex (:
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he's 18 in a month, i just turned 15. i went to his house and we were fooling around. he never forced anything on me so when i suddenly yelled no and wait and he did it anyway i...well it hurt...and then i went numb. afterwards i couldn't walk and my voice was shaking and my entire body trembling. i tried getting away but somehow my legs gave out. then he realized what he did and apologized over and over again. i said it was ok....he wants to meet next saturday. after he did it my entire body was trembling and i was breathing so hard i couldn't cry. i was just.....idk. i know it was my fault for not being more assertive. but i didn't expect him to. he knew i didn't want to and apologized afterwards saying he was sorry for forcing me. it was all my fucking fault and i don't know what to do now. we were safe. but he wants to meet this saturday and i know nothing good can come of it and he'll just do it again. it's fucked up, but even though i feel traumatized...i'm tempted to go back. what's wrong with me? i know i don't want it so why is my body telling me to? i'm not a masochist. what's wrong with me? i should be weary of my abuser yet i'm drawn to go back. am i just fucked up? help me please. i don't know what to do. (link)
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No. No. No.
Boys cannot always help hormones and if anybody wants to contridict me let's give it a whirl!!!
You're in shock. This was rape, yes. But if he is overwhelmed with sorrow and regret then I understand his point of view. He was going to fast and did too much. Who knows, maybe he DIDN'T hear you and DIDN'T realize what happened until he saw what had happened. It's not your fault either though. I say you see him again, that is.. if YOU want. Nothing is wrong with you, you're in shock. Give you're body and mind time to realize what's happened. You're okay, sweetheart. (: I know this isn't a smiling situation but I do that alot. It might help to speak to an adult about this, or you could speak to me about it if you'd like, i'm not a freak out to get you (: You can speak to an adult, parent, guardian, teacher, friend, whoever you trust. Just give it a bit of time.
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I don't like sex at ALL and I feel that my girlfriend is really pressuring me into it. I told her my past experiences led me to be this way (among other things) and I don't want to hurt her feelings. How can I tell her to just back off? (link)
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Ohhh. This isn't good. There is not way you can just get her to "back off". She has hormones. Oh, that's a tough blow I feel super bad for your girlfriend, and bad for you as well. Try taking it very slow. Maybe you'll grow to like it?? If not then you're going to have to explain in explicit detail perhaps, not THAT explicit but... you're going to have to give her an idea of what those "past experiences" are and why you don't like it. She might understand but she might leave you. It's HARD to be in a relationship where sex drives are not some what compatible.
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I'm pretty fit, I just have a bit more weight to lose. What kind of exercise is kind to my knees but burns a ton of calories? (link)
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I highly suggest little kids games. I know that sounds rediculous but it's true. Hula Hooping cuts 2 inches off your waist. Tag is an excellent exercise. So, this is an incredible workout if you have young kids. Oh! There's also leapfrog. You remember those old kid games, hopscotch, race, freeze tag, freeze dance. Go, Have Fun! (:
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what are some cute, flirty or sexy things that i could send my girlfriend just randomly in the day to make her smile? i usually do it but im just running out of things to say
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Yeah, I'm not going to give you bullcrap answers full of sappy things to say that would make you sound like you went on the computer and looked up "sweet things to make your girlfriend smile". Haaha! Tell her real things, how you're feeling and I know that's no fun so here...
"Hey Baby, How are you?" (Girls love telling what they're feeling)
"Hey Babe/Baby/Sweetie *tell her what you're doing* I love/miss (depending on how close ya'll are) you." (This will make her smile because you're letting her know something. It makes her feel good.)
"I miss you." (Girls love being missed.)
Just things like that. How are you? What are you doing?
She'll smile just because the text is from you. Don't be some corny jack in the box with too much aftershave and a tuxedo. haaha.
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Ok, I know it sounds like a terrible thing to tell someone, but I am very concerned for her, and my neices' and nephew's health and wellbeing. My sister has never been a clean person. She keeps herself and her children clean, but actually cleaning a room or her house is impossible for her. I remember as a child she used to close her eyes and wish for the "cleaning fairy" (me) to come and clean up her room. I would do it because I thought I was surprising her and making her happy. When she was a teenager our mother would beg, plead, and punish her to clean her room, until one day she went through with huge black garbage bags and threw EVERYTHING away. She ended up with three or four of them filled with mostly garbage and items that my sister mistreated. Now, at the age of 29 and mother of three children (one of which she only has custody of part time) things haven't changed much. I don't really know who does the minimal cleaning that actually gets done, usually when she knows someone is coming over to visit, so I can't really say who is pitching in to keep the house liveable, but here is an idea of what her (rented) house looks like even when she knows I am coming to visit...There are usually dishes in the sink, filled to the top. If the dishes have been washed, they are not properly cleaned, cups still have dried up drink in them, plates and silverware still have caked-on food on them and plasticware have an oily film on them. The scrubbie she uses to wash the dishes is always grungy and probably filled with germs. The carpets have ground-in food and liquid stains, not to mention clothes, toys, garbage, ashes (from cigarettes) and other debris on them. Her kitchen linoleum has years of caked on food and dried liquid stains, even after she claims she just mopped. Her bathroom sink always has toothepaste globs and soap film and dirt on it. (She hardly ever has soap at her bathroom sink either) The toilet is so disgusting I don't sit on it, there is usually pee or poop smeared on the seat. (She has young children 4 and 7 but she allows the 4 year old to go to the bathroom without supervision and if she goes #2 she doesn't know how to clean herself properly and usually gets poop on the toilet, herself, and sometimes the walls, sink, and other things in the bathroom) You can't even walk into her bedroom because there are clothes covering the entire floor, not to metion other debris. The children's rooms are just as bad, with toys and clothes, food and juice stains. The children do not respect their toys and I wouldn't doubt it if not one of their games is playable because of missing or broken pieces. Books are ripped and colored on as well. Her laundry room is in the basement and everyone just throws their clothes down the stairs, covering the stairs to the point where you would fall if you did not kick them out of the way. The laundry is not done often, unless it is desperately needed.
My sister seems to care about what people think about the cleanliness of her home, because it is the first thing you hear when you are on the way to visit, "My house is a little messy, but not too bad." or "I was going to clean the house but..., so don't be mad if it's not that clean." or "I just cleaned the house." (And then you get there and think "This is what you consider clean?") She just never seems to know what clean is, even remotely. But she puts on this facade like it is important to her.
Now that I'm done explaining that, I would like to add that just recently the family suffered a house fire and they lost everything. They did not start the fire, but the fire marshal said that all the junk around the house fueled the fire to rage on faster and further. I began a relief effort through friends and family that brought her truckloads of new things, not to mention all the help she received from organizations in her area. I drove all over creation to collect things for her...I called and emailed several people to collect things for her...I created donation tins out of old coffee cans and set them up at my job for her...I've donated my own posessions as well. When she got herself into a new house I went to visit her. I fully expected there to be stuff all over the place in boxes and bags, but I was very upset when I saw that every room in her house was the same as it always had been. Bathroom had the toothepaste globs and hair all over the sink, no soap, and the brand new towels that were donated to her were sprawled throughout the hallway outside the bathroom (not folded and in a pile) Her bedroom looked like a bomb went off, and the kids' rooms looked the same. I told her that I thought everything would be different now that she has gone through such a life altering event and had all of her current possessions donated to her. She screamed "What do you want me to do?! I keep getting all of this stuff and I have no place to put it!!!" I told her I understood that her dining room was filled from wall to wall with with things she had to sort through, but the room upstairs were so messy. I was so taken aback with her violent response I began to back out of the room when she screamed "Yeah get out of here!" I ended up leaving her house and eventually she texted me "You no longer have to worry about me, my family, or my house. I feel we should no longer speak to each other. Good luck iwth your life and family." I cannot believe she took things to that level. I sincerely believe that she is in denial about her problem and instead of giving me excuses like I said she would, she disowned me, my husband, and baby-to-be. I am very hurt but cannot bring myself to talk to her. I helped her so much when her house burned down and she also said she was going to send back the money and items I collected for her. I think that was very wrong of her as well. PLEASE HELP!!
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Tell your mom to give her a good spanking.
I'm serious.
It'd work for us.
OR GET YOUR GRANDMA INVOLVED!!!
Once more,
I'm seirous.
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