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literature
iambic pentameter is this correct?
then ares spoke words of resentment and
grief this is not the end of your wicked
deed he is my son you prevent me as when
zeus chained Atlas to the depths of Tartarus and
will never let him escape my son is my
most prized possession more valuable
than immortality. Now since you restrain
me to Thasos we will go and fight until you
consent to my wish. The grey eyed goddess
replied if I must fight you I will but
if I win you powerful ARes will
fight for the Achaeans so that the troubled Achaeans will sorrow no more.
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It is the general policy of most advisors not to assist with homework. That being said I will suggest this.
You may want to add punctuation marks so it reads better and format it correctly in poetic verse.
I'm not saying anything is wrong it is just my opinion. It has been many decades since High School English and fortunately I did not have poetry as part of college English.
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