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Question Posted Thursday January 26 2017, 12:10 pm

Thank you limitlessly for your words and advice of immense kindness! :'D I have written much since I last asked advice from you. Here it is, please give me your honest feedback. :)

"Seize the sun with the power of your grasp, and you will gain the scintillating light to outshine all who've wronged you, I have told myself for countless years. Every ray of fiery crimson and amber that illuminates from the dark massiveness of the Milky Way leaves me breathless and enchanted, which is why every time someone attempts to damage who I am I repeat that quote in the pit of my mind. In all the moments of the life I am struggling to exist in, the gigantic sun full of igneous light has forever been a deep love of mine. Childhood was a time where I would simple-mindedly strive to admire the exotic beauty of the sun, which is more than likely the reason for my poor eyesight. I was too young in my child years to realize that no human could travel to the sun and live. Unless he was immortal or untouchable to fatal heat. To be entirely honest, I miss my childhood days when I daydreamed about being the first astronaut to travel to the far most enormous star in our vast galaxy. I would appear on every news channel as the bravest and most fearless individual to ever be known. Expect for people to think I'm outrageously inane, I did, but never did it cross my mind that I would care. I was a youthful child; I was carefree about every opinion from anyone! I imagined being in that stereotypical rocketship that every child is used to. Covered in white with one circular window at the front alongside the currant red fins at the bottom. It's so cheesy, I know but I was young.

How come we're destined to grow up? It's the simplest time of your life, but then you're unwillingly forced to advance into maturity and pressured to go to college to further your life into something beautiful. But what if you don't want to grow up? What if you're deathly afraid of what'll happen to you when you're old enough to conceive a child, or marry some person that you only met two years ago, or how damn impossible college might be with pulling all-nighters and putting your foot forward to bully your tiredness into allowing you to stay awake in class the following day? Why can't it just remain simple? Everything would be bright and dandy if everything just remained simple. "


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rainhorse68 answered Saturday January 28 2017, 5:43 am:
Hi there. Wow! This sent me off to a dark old cupboard looking for a book. Can I run something by you? Scene: A small group of old friends talking all night over brandy. They're older now and comfortable and succesful men. They were friends together at 14 and joined the trading/merchant shipping companies (in the days of sailing ships).

"But you here-you all had something out of life: money, love-whatever one gets on shore-and, tell me, wasn't that the best time, that time when you were young and at sea; young and had nothing, on the sea that gives nothing, except hard knocks-and sometimes a chance to feel your strength-that only-what we all regret?
And we all nodded at him: the man of finance, the man of accounts, the man of law, we all nodded at him over the polished table that like a still sheet of brown water reflected our faces, lined now, wrinkled; our faces marked by toil, by deceptios, by success, by love; our weary eyes looking still, looking always, looking anxiously for something out of life, that while it is expected is already gone-has passed unseen, in a sigh, in a flash-together with the youth, with the strength, with the romance of illusions."

This (sublime) narrative on the regrets of lost youth is by Conrad and it's easy to praise. Coloufrul, vivid word pictures. Complex emotions perfectly conveyed in a few simple phrases. Not a single word wasted. You can see that room, eh? Can feel what they're feeling?The rhythms, the narrative style (and even the SUBJECT, by God!) are very much like yours, arent they? Conrad's tall-ships map onto your rocket-ship. The emotions you express mirror those of the four frinds. So. YES. I think this is pretty good!! Write back anytime you like. I'm looking forward to it mate!

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