I had to listen 3 times to finally pick out the words. It is better if its clear to understand the lyrics the first time for listeners.
Of course, I am older and perhaps my ears aren't hearing as sharp as they should. But I assume you want you music to be heard by everyone, no matter what their age. So I would slow it down or enunciate a bit more. I know a gal at church who sang solo's often and sounded much like you. She took voice lessons and as a result sounded even better though already pretty good. On a positive side, I am sure you already know that from all the singing talent on TV, many can be in tie for greatest but the one who usually gets the votes of standing out among the best is the one who sings with feeling and soul in their music. People pick up on the emotion and I hear some of that with you. As is, you're good enough in todays world to sing in choirs, in a rock band or some such public venue. But if it comes to meeting what I consider the unrealistic qualitys in some cases of what TV portrays, I am sure the general world may not be unanimous about your talent.
Are you good? Yes, to me you are. But I have my own tastes in singers too so you will get varying answers on a scale of one to ten. Even those who'd qualify on Americas got talent, never make it. If you want a career making a living singing, you could easily do so, but continue to work on your voice. While also getting used to performing in front of people maybe a hired singer for Weddings, in a choir, band, or just doing kareoke at public places. Not being a skilled singer myself, I would give you 8. [ Dragonflymagic's advice column | Ask Dragonflymagic A Question ]
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