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Am I considered a good poet?
Poem #1
“Untitled”-Sabryn Alstatt
Beautiful you
Beautimous and true
Being great; being kind
You are one to find
Being proud of yourself; no one else can tell you different
Stay you and you’ll make it through
I see nothing but brains and smarts
Although you are one brilliant piece of art
You will be one along with few that have helped you fly
Going through life not ever knowing why
You are strong; you are bright
You have nothing to fright
Take a stride; take pride
You’re one in a million; compared to others it’s one in a billion
Stay strong you have won the battle
Sit back and watch the rest rattle
Shining bright; like a star
You believed in yourself; so you went very far
Poem #2
“Untitled”- Sabryn Alstatt
So great and settle
You can now rest
For your journey was too great
Or your timing too late
You fought like a stallion
But the chances of winning were one in a billion
You may have lost but that’s okay
Because you saw it a different way
You couldn’t win; but at least you tried
But you couldn’t just sit around and hide
That’s life; you live then die
Ending your life not knowing why
You are now dead; alone and cold
But you were the one that was brave and bold
The fight has ended can’t you tell
If the bell had ended with a ting-tong bell
They carry your corpse along in a coffin
They may be sad but that didn’t mean stoppin’
Although you lost the battle; you won
No matter the fight; you were their last one
To survive so long in so little time; with each minsicule second just ticking by.
Poem #3
“Trust”-Sabryn Alstatt
Believe in me; believe in you
We will surely make it through
With the help of you and the help of me
We will then both see
The love, the faith, the trust
But it all starts with us
You are my smile; gleaming eye
Taking a breath to just get a sigh
Standing soldiers; yes we are
Because we saw past all the scars
The way you enlighten me; leaves me breathless to thee
The scars, the cuts, the tears that roll
Are soon to be all under control
I love you; you love me
All the pain has willowed away
What that lays in your purse; we are finally free of this curse
Poem #4
“The Choice”-Sabryn Alstatt
Choices are to be made; Choices as sour as lemonade
Flavors change; Flavors sour; Flavors change every hour
The final hour has come to an end; Choices that come to such a bend
The time has come to make a choice
The choice I pick is not about boys
But more of how I go live; Live into the rules of five
The rules start with confident; Then go to independent
The third goes to trust; which is an absolute must
The fourth is loyalty; which means no cruelty
The fifth belongs to honest; If you choose to be the best; you choose to be honest
The choice has been made, yes it is
To be a confident, loyal, whiz
The whiz I am The whiz you are; You will never be too far
For your dreams to come true; you must look up to the blue
The sky, that has all the clouds; Until the thunder alouds
The night will come; the stars will shine
Then your life will be in line
Wish upon a shooting star; you will surely go far
Your dream has come true yes, it’s true; But it’s all because you believed in you.
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I love it Sabyryn!try Teen ink.I cant remember if I already told u that :/
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Yes you are very good. There are sites on line you can join where you can share your poems with others who write poetry as well. You might try that because you will get more response on your poetry there.
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Yes, I think this is good, well-written poetry.
Just keep in mind that this is an advice site, not an opinion site or a poetry site. (This topic is mentioned on the FAQ page.) If you want to share your poetry with others and get people's opinions, it would be best to go to a poetry or writing website. Try going to www.wattpad.com or you can search for other poetry websites on Google.
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