I think I'm going to write about the person I am influenced by. But after I wrote it, I wasn't sure if I was doing it right. I explained everything about the person that I find admirable. Then I was almost done, but I felt like it didn't say anything about me. It felt like I was writing a biography on the person. Can you tell me how to make myself come across in the essay? Or should I just start over with a new topic?
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