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Question Posted Tuesday November 10 2009, 1:35 pm

I think I'm going to write about the person I am influenced by. But after I wrote it, I wasn't sure if I was doing it right. I explained everything about the person that I find admirable. Then I was almost done, but I felt like it didn't say anything about me. It felt like I was writing a biography on the person. Can you tell me how to make myself come across in the essay? Or should I just start over with a new topic?

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azndude09 answered Sunday November 15 2009, 2:50 pm:
When you write an essay about a person you are influenced by, you're basically writing more about your views on that person. A biography is the story of someone's life and background. Just read the title of the essay you're writing and you should come up with main ideas on how to start your essay. You're ideas should support the title of your essay.

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lilshortyr888 answered Tuesday November 10 2009, 8:32 pm:
make sure to add a few paragraphs that include how those admirable characteristics you already talked about influenced you.

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