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descriptive essay


Question Posted Thursday February 12 2009, 3:15 pm

I am writing a descriptive essay on a place. I just don't know how to start it and end my essay. I know of hooks (attention getters) and so on but I don't know what to use. Please help! Thank You.

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michelle823 answered Saturday February 14 2009, 7:52 pm:
maybe you could start with a question or use lots of figurative language.
its kinda hard to help you because i dont know what youre writing about, but if you message me aand tell me what youre writing about, ill def. help you out a little more :D

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vikkikimberly answered Friday February 13 2009, 2:25 pm:
hey
aww i lvoe creative writting
um use a few metaphors (when you say something is something is something else (cant think of any exapmles right now)
use some adjectives
try using simlies too - saying something is like somethigns else, for example the school day was as tiring like a long trek through the hot dry desert.
try building on the middle o yu essay first if you cant think of a begininng and end... think of your content before you do your begining and end.
so you know if you want to mislead the readers or tell them stright what will happen or leave a cliffhanger at the end... you get the idea

sorry for UK vocab( dunno where you are)... im an english chickky y'see...

good luck!! =)
vikkikimberly

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