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Pome about a relationship


Question Posted Tuesday July 22 2008, 12:23 am

Ok so I totally wrote about a past relationship that I was in will you tell me what you think and please be honest...
Thanx =]


~*~Love?~*~

I saw you for the first time and my heart was pounding
I thought you were amazing even before I knew you
Knowing that I couldn’t have you,
You were taken,
I just admired you from afar and only wished,

We became close,
My heart had never felt like this before
I could fill myself falling more and more for you

You had my heart once before,
Before I really knew you,
But you took it and broke it

Now you have it again
Even more than ever
And I trust you with it
Hoping and praying that you wont break it again

And even if they say
“We are too young for love”
I can feel the “MAGIC”
The magic between your heart and mine
The force that holds us together as one

But as the days go on
And the months pass by
I don’t feel as strongly connected to you
I feel as if we are slipping out of reach
Out of reach of each other

We have our fights now and then
But we always worked it out in the end
You do things that hurt me but out of love I forgive quickly

Fighting more frequently now I start to doubt what we have
The once meaningful words “I Love You” lost their feeling
And now just seem like a daily routine

But when those words are said to someone else it’s not the same
Said behind someone’s back
When that person finds out it’s heart breaking

Then to deny at all costs even when you know its true
But only to fine yourself guilty
Finally admitting what is true
But still the lies linger there between us
Stories are told and are changed and changed again
But the truth is still hiding there beneath the lies

Finally not being able to take it anymore
I try to go peacefully
You wont allow that
Scaring me into staying
I forgive and not so much forget

Yet still I think what I think
And only know what I think is the truth
Still the lies are there, feeling them all around

Its over now
What we had
What we thought was true love
That magic, it died
Now we are left with two people
Two people that know way too much about one another

Distant now
Never speaking toward each other
Not know if ending it was the best thing to do

But we are young
And love hurts
And that magic that we once felt
It will come back
It will just be between to different people


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Annerszz_101 answered Tuesday July 22 2008, 4:54 am:
Actually, it's really good.
You have a talent. =]

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