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Song lyrics - making my own


Question Posted Tuesday January 15 2008, 5:34 am

17/f.

I'm making a few songs of my own on my guitar.
I need help with some lyrics.
A few really good phases or verses etc would be great if someone could help me out.
Even just a couple of sentences would be terrific.

One song is about a girl who's best friend (male) moves away from her and they are going through a really hard time and he feels as though he is forgotten.

The second one is about a girl who really likes a boy, and she knows he likes her a bit too but she doesn't know how to tell him.

Any help would be just great.
As I said earlier, even just a couple of sentences to get me started, doesn't matter if its part of the verse, chorus or whatever.
Thanks so much to anyone who can help me out.

xx


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Psycotheis answered Tuesday January 15 2008, 7:16 pm:
For the first song, try to make it sound like Untitled by Simple Plan. Its slow and sad and would add feeling to any lyrics to the song you make. For ideas in lyrics, try listening to Already Over, prt 2 by Red, Birthday by Taproot, Broken by Seether, Push Me Away by Last Goodnight, or I need You by Relient K

The second one, make it sound all happy and glad like the boy is the one of everyones dreams and she would do anything to get him, but then get all awkward and then sad or embarrassed feel to the song. Realize that if you treat the way you play like they were real life situations, you give more feel to your songs. For lyrics ideas try listening to One Im Waiting For by Relient K, I Want to Hold Your Hand from Across the Universe, or Show Me a Sign by Breaking Point.

Sorry I couldnt be more help by giving like a poem or something, but it takes a long time to be inspired and you and I both dont have that kind of time...

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MzJENNiFER answered Tuesday January 15 2008, 6:09 pm:
For the first song;
Why'd you leave. Was it something I said. Is it the way I dress. Please. I feel as if I am a lonely mess. I need you. I thought you needed me. You probably forgot about all our memories.
[And maybe at the End]
Okay. I'll let you be.

For the second song;
Did you did you? Just flirt with me. Is it the truth or is it fantasy? Fighting temptation. It's so hard. Do you do you? Like me or not?

Hoped I Helped and Good Luck:]

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