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does this make sence?
why cant i just let go & move on
when i know im just holding on
to a hopeless wish thats
never gunna come true.
its a qoute thing i made. i wanna put something in my profile explaining whats going on in my life. which is :: i like this guy. we went out and i broke up with him. now i regret it and i miss him like crazy and the " hopeless wish" is that i could get another chance. if this doesnt make sence and you have something better please tell me =] and that wasnt the first time we went out so it cant say anything like " having a second chance. "
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You did a great job with it. The only suggestion I would make is that you use proper spelling/punctuation/caps/etc. It would look more professional and be slightly more powerful because it would look like an adult wrote it instead of a 12 year old kid. In other words, it would look like you were actually in pain and understood your feelings instead of just whining about things you don't even understand.
Why can't I just let go and move on
when I know I'm just holding on
to a hopeless wish
that's never going to come true?
It doesn't look bad with the first W not capitalized since it would be online, and it wouldn't look too bad with no caps at all. You can also do a lot with colors, styles (bold/underline/italics), and fully capitalized words. That way you can put emphasis in the right places. For example, capitalize NEVER or put it in a different color, font, size, or style. :)
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I quite like it. It does make sense, however, a tiny bit of tweaking could make it a little better.
Why can't I let go and move on
When I know I'm just holding on
To a hopeless wish that'll never come true
Rolls a bit better.
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wishful thinking is a heartbreaker.
love isn't worth the second chance.
i wish the 3rd time could be a charm.
I tried lol. :]
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