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Storyyy :]
Well this is my story on Buddy4u.com
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I really need more ideas, on what happens and stuff. Im kinda stuck, I dont know what should happen. If anyone has any ideas please let me know. And dont just be like make the dad die, or whatever. Tell me with detail, and if you could rate it and sign the guestbook for me please?
Heres the link so you can find it easy to rate it:
[Link](Mouse over link to see full location) its the tenth one down.
THANK YOU SO MUCH
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I think you need to work on your story, a lot, before continuting. The writing isn't very good, it's quite unrealistic, it doesn't flow, and it just sounds like an un thought out soap opera. You just jumped straight into the events without even developing a character base. Make a character web, plot outlines, descriptions, etc, before writing more chapters.
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I'd love to help you, not just here, but if you need help in the future. :]]
First of all, I'd recomend if you're really serious about writing, you should join a writing site like Quizilla or fanfiction.com or fictionpress.com. I'm a member of all three. :]
Work on your spacing for your writing- it'll make it look more professional. I might would even make your font a little bigger, so it's easier to read.
What genre are you making this story? Usually people tend to start dropping hints of that type of thing within the first ten chapters.
If you need more help, just drop me a line.:]
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