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Is this a goodd....
poem??
So now I think I’ll lie on this bed
And ponder the words I left unsaid
I’ll disappear into this night so lonely
And lie with you, my one and only…
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Would probably be better with a different last line. I'm not a big fan of emotional teenager angst in poems, or in general actually.
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umm wow to the person who responded previous. Dont listen to them. I like it, I think its really good. :]
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It's a little short, but I see nothing wrong with it.
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