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Deadline approcahing: Good thesis statement for a 3000 word
Topic: The United Nations has come under some considerable criticism over the last few years for its failure to help nations develop and also to prevent domestication atrocities such as genocide. What kinds of problems has the UN failed to resolve? What measures have been taken by the UN to address these problems. Have they (or will they) be successful?
Thesis: Although considered an independent organization and a world government by many people, the UN doesn’t voice the opinion of the entire world. Rather, it echoes the voice of, or lack thereof, it’s main member-states. The self-interest and deficiency of support from developed countries has rendered the United Nations powerless and unable to fulfill it’s goals.
Could someone please check over that for me? Any feedback / ideas / links regarding the essay would be appreciated too.
I was up to my neck in Psych homework and totally forgot all about it. Now I have 34 hours to get this paper written :s
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Nice thesis. I'd change "the UN doesn't voice the opinion" to "the UN does not represent the opinion" or "does not adequately represent", though. It's best not to use contractions in formal papers. Also, I'd spell out United Nations the first time it's used in each paragraph.
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