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What you think of this poem?
Well to start things off ill tell you why i worte it...well i wrote it because it is my friends b-day and i wanted to get her something and make her somthing so it came from me and not just something i bought...if that makes sence!! So i worte this and i wanted to know how it sounds to you and if theres any changes you would make... here it is: Ill rate!!!
**Danielle Joan**
There’s many things I can say about you
But the thing that sticks out the most is that you’re my best friend
You’re a friend I can always count on to be there
You make me smile and brighten my day
You’re a friend I can always have a good time with
There may be times when we fight but we somehow work it out
Were two best friends that can never be torn apart
When I am not with you something always reminds me of you
Weather it be your laugh or your bell button ring
Something always rings a bell
You’re a great girl that I love dearly
Honestly I don’t know what I would do without you
But luckily I don’t have to think about that
Cause you’re my friend
You’re the friend I never lose
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aaww... that's so sweet!I think it sounds really nice!! I think she'll like it, she sounds like a nice person, so she'll probablly apreciate it a lot. I think it'sgood you made her something instead of buying her something. To tell you the truth i wouldn't change it, honestly. I'm sure she'll like it a lot!
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