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i'm sorry this is alot to read.


Question Posted Sunday April 2 2006, 9:27 pm

this is my essay. i need a conclusion. please help asap!

The typical teenage bedroom can be quite horrific. There is a disgusting stench that hits your nostrils from the sweaty track clothes and smelly socks. You will most likely trip the blankets which are scattered about from last week's slumber party. The tubes of lip stick along with nail polish bottles, makeup everywhere, yes, this is the typical, female, teenage bedroom. Luckily, I am one who does not fit into that category. I am actually quite different than explained.

As you walk in my room your brain might be alarmed by the tidyness. Your nose will tickle from the smell of freshly used pledge. You'll probally want to jump into my cleans sheets of my twin size bed. That is definately the feeling you'd get from slowly walking into my bedfroom. My bedroomis a place where i do my homeowrk, talk on the phone, occasionally exercise, read, get ready in the morning, sleep, and just have quiet time. To me my room is like a peice of art, one of a kind. Without my room i'd not be myself.
When you walk in you'd se alot of my personality shining through. If you step both feet into my room, you'll be standing between a door and a dresser. The dresser is of a dark wood which is smooth like glass. There is a towel directly on top of my dresser so that things like my jewlery box and T.V. don't scatch it. While still standing in the doorway, you can see the right side of my small, 13 inch tv. My televison only has three channels, 21[4], 27[6], and 33[7].
If you walk in a little further your eyes will begin to notice the very white, floral wallpaper. Resting against the wall is a DVD tower. It is black and it hold some of my very favorite DVD's. Directly next to that is an MTV Karoke Machine. It is silver and blue with a 4x6 inch screen. On the screen plays lyrics of certain cd's. It holds two microphones, one on each side.
Next is my oak computer desk/stand. My laptop computer sits on top of my desk, one of my most valuable possesions. Also there's two little drawers and a shelf on top. On the top shelf I have a disco ball lamp, lava lamp, an alarm clock, and a mirror. It makes my room all the more creative. I do my homework on my computer, browse the web, and talk to my friends on AIM. I am always sitting on my wooden computer chair talking on the phone, listening to music, and doing other various activites.
As we go passed the desk, you'll find my beloved bed. It's twin size, has a black comforter, which has big white flowers outlined on it, big fluffy pink pillows, and alot of differnt colored blankets. There is a very warm, pink blanket, a green with red polka dots blanket, a purple and blue striped blanket, and half orange, half pink blanket. All of these blankets have special memories to me. My room is basically black, hot pink, and silver chrome. On all four bed posts of my bed, my purses hang. My bed is a daybed, so it has alot of room underneath it to store my items. Under my bed I have things such as make-up containers, Barbies, beads, and alot of other random things. The bed is against the back wall like a hotdog, or longways.
Right next to my bed is a nightstand. It's white and has a silver chrome lamp on it. The lamp shade is hot pink. There are three baskets that hold random, corky items that I own. The first shelf holds hair ties and hairbands. The second shelt contains hair brushes and my journel. The last shelf has lotion, goggles, and wallets.
Along the next wall is my huge confiquration which holds my clothes and shoes. On the left 2/3's of the stand is my shirts and skirts. Beneath that is my coats and jeans. On the right handside there are shelves. My bras, big t-shirts, and tank tops lay on the very top shelf. Below that is my dvd player and magazines. In the bottom shelf is more magazines and many cd's. Above all my cd's, magazines, clothes, and other various stuff, is my shoes. They are above everything. Only somebody tall could pick out a pair of shoes.
Lastly we have my dresser. It holds, on top, my televison and jewlery box along with my face cleaner.



i need and ending along iwth any suggestions.


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