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Does my poetry suck?


Question Posted Tuesday January 24 2006, 1:12 am

I have to hand in a personal piece and I decided to hand in one from my journal. It's hard for me to expose my poetry to other people so I was hoping you guys could just take a look att his for me:

Twirling. Fingers. A strand of hair.
Chin resting on her hand. Lightly.
A look of disinterest in her eyes.
Her brown eyes.
Eyes that appeal only to a few.
Those who see the light around her.
She glows. She shimmers. She is a queen.

Is it crap? Does it sound too yearning, self-obsessed or romantic?
I'm supposed to hand in something -real- but this is the one that hits home hardest.


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