Question Posted Thursday November 17 2005, 6:44 pm
hey guys. i'm usually good at this kind of stuff, but this part of the poem is really confusing. can you please help me out?
no fate (for you are my fate, my sweet), i want
no world (for beautiful you are my world, my true)
and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you
here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can hope or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
pllleeeease help. i will give you a 5 for trying, if you're not a smartass.
Additional info, added Thursday November 17 2005, 6:59 pm: i need to know what this poem means. i did not write this poem, so please do not tell me it is good. i only want to hear what you think it is about.. Want to answer more questions in the Work & School category? Maybe give some free advice about: School? Rekin9x5 answered Thursday December 1 2005, 9:58 pm: Ok , the poem i think is saying that The man doesnt care where his life carries him because she is the world to him and no matter what happens as long as she is by him his world, fate, life, light is all complete. But she doesnt know and that his dark secret and he wuld do all the things in the world just to let her know he loves her and know she feels the same way and its tearing him apart. [ Rekin9x5's advice column | Ask Rekin9x5 A Question ]
bubblesamin answered Thursday November 17 2005, 8:17 pm: Dear Poet,
I think the poem is about love. They are saying in the first part that there is no fate and that there is no world because their saying that the person they love they revolve around so that person is their fate and world. The sun and moon part probably means that the reason why the moon comes at night to spread the light across the night sky just for that special person. The sun part mean that the only reason why the sun comes out is because of that same special person and the person makes it shine. They mean that the rays are substituding for the sound and the sun is happy to see that person so they make the sun shine brighter. THe last part probably means that the person loves that special person more than anybody knows and that no matter what that person will always be in the lovers heart. I hoped i helped and if i didn't i'm sorry but that's what i got from the peom.
fire_angel_93 answered Thursday November 17 2005, 6:57 pm: your words are you unspoken (but speak to me every night) you cutest is oh so very cute( but you look so stupid) i love you so(but you don't even speak a melody to my beautiful face) it's seems like I am always a ghost( but when you are around i'm alive) sorry i am not good at it.. [ fire_angel_93's advice column | Ask fire_angel_93 A Question ]
darkblair771 answered Thursday November 17 2005, 6:55 pm: i hold your soul (deep within my very lips)
or
i taste your lips(locked on mine)
something like that, i don't really know if you wanted it to rhyme but i love poems so hope i helped [ darkblair771's advice column | Ask darkblair771 A Question ]
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