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Can you tel me if you think this is good?


Question Posted Tuesday November 1 2005, 5:43 pm

Although we have to be apart,
We'll always be together,
Close enough in mind and heart
To manage any weather.

Reality is often bleak,
But love remains inside
A glass house on a mountain peak,
The wintry world beside.

Love can build its own four walls
And heat its own small room.
Through icy winds and blinding squalls,
Love can be in bloom.

Though continents drift far downstream
And mountains disappear,
And life dissolve into a dream,
Our love will still be here,
You'll turn, and I'll be here.


I wrote it to my ex boyfriend, who is and always has been more then an ex boyfriend to me. I want to give it too him because we are both still madly in love with each other but its avery complicated story..but I just want to kno if u think its good, or if i should add anything to it..I rate high..

<3Samii


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