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WAT DO U THINK


Question Posted Friday October 8 2004, 3:06 pm

Ok I don't really need advice but i was hoping you guys could tell me what u think of my poem:

I am a person with so much pain
I am a girl with nothing left to gain
I am your daughter telling you a lie
I am that one girl who is quiet and shy
I am a person with dreams and doubts
I am a little girl who likes to pout
I am the one who believes in my dreams
I am a teenager who shouts and screams
I am a little boy with cancer whos weak
I am the one searching for the coirage I seek
I am a person who believes in many things
I am the angel you see with beautiful wings

I wrote that and showed it to my parents. They said it was very good and I should submit it to an upcoming Chicken Soup book. I got the idea from a Chicken Soup book I read a while ago with a poem in it(which is wat gave me the idea the title and the I AMS but the rest of it is nothing like the other poem)

hope yall liked it!!!!
*kris*

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