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Eh? Any good?
Just curious if this is any good or not...wrote it awhile ago
Tomorrow Never Comes
If tomorrow never comes,
And time quickly slips away
Will you float away happy
Or surely regret every living day?
If tomorrow never comes,
Will you regret every smile you never gave?
All the words you never said?
A phone call never made?
Think about it now
And think about it clear
If tomorrow never came
Would you look back and shed a tear?
For all the time your determination fell short?
Or when you painfully just gave up
Would you spend your days crying?
Or spend them living it up?
Would you talk shit behind people’s backs?
And give into the cruelty of society
Would you spend your last day angry
What would be your #1 priority?
Where will you spend your last day?
The last beat of your drum
If, by chance
Tomorrow never comes?
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I liked it, especially this part:
Think about it now
And think about it clear
If tomorrow never came
Would you look back and shed a tear?
It was very insightful & made me think. Nice work.
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slightly depressing but the poetry isn't bad at all. Nice job and keep witing poetry cuz its fun and you pretty good at it : )
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that is really really good! I like it a lot you've got a talent! I'm encouraging you to write more! Good luck!
-holly-
Keep up the good work!
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