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this time im going to bleed
i need to finish this deed
all this pain i kept inside
it will no longer hide
all this pain you put me through
now i say I HATE YOU
u tried to do the best for me
but why cant you see
im failing classes
i doubt any im passin
ive hurted for so long
i cant be strong
for this is my last
now ive passed....
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Very good poem
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Ack! This has good sentiments behind it but, the cliqué rhyming is terrible! It feels so forced, that it almost makes the rest of the poem not flow well. Just keep practicing writing from the heart....
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That poem rocks. It says a lot of things about life. Good Job!
Lizzy
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