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Okay, These are two poems

I, Who

I, Who walks the path of unconsiousness lives an Illusion
Breaths the air, Walks the earth
Thou this day my heart still beats


(What does this poem mean? ^)

2nd Poem..

I Am

I am, that tint of light in your heart
I wonder, When I look at the moon do you look also?
I hear, Your whisper, your cry, your sadness
I see, That teardrop stream down your face
I want to be that person to lift you up off your feet

I am, that tint of light in your heart
I pretend to be nothing but a friend to you
I felt, Nothing but love for you
I touch, Your heart with my own words
I worry, that one day I won't be here when you really need me
I cried, when you've cried
I am, That tint of light in my heart
I understand that when something hurts it stings
I say I've felt that pain many times before
I dream, You dream, We all dream
I hope one day you will the same for me
I want to be that tint of light in your heart


Both of these poems where written by me, I just wanted some outlook on others what they think it means to them.


Thanks :) (link)
To me, the first poem conveys the message that you are a ghost among men. Living and breathing yet still not as alive as others. Living in an illusion of a world caught between the living and the dead.

The second poem conveys the message that you want to be the one who brings happiness to a person's life. You admire them extremely, yet you play it down, pretending to harbor nothing but friendship and camaraderie.

I hope what I got was what you wanted the reader to feel.


Rating: 3
Thank you :)




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