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What do you guys think of this? Honestly.


Question Posted Tuesday April 1 2008, 4:01 pm

i get to doubting you
and i get to giving up
and i get to feeling blue
and i get to going numb
and then the 'numb' sets in
it's nostalgia, i think
but i can still feel those little pins
baby sure knows how to push me to the brink

sink deep down under
sweet, sweet morphine
i mistook it all for something so serene
just douse thes words down, and use cheap kerosene
burn the memories, too, cause they're haunting me
life's one big battle field and we're waging these wars
but what the hall are we fighting for?
what the hell have i been fighting for?

i'll sleep now, cause i can't stay awake
and the dreams are better than what i face
you've got no right even being here
causing this pain and instilling this fear
i'd give it all, just watch me bleed
in return, fresh insecurity
if we go and start again
it's just watching me fall, and seeing you pretend

i'd more than gladly
sink deep down under sweet, sweet morphine
i mistook it all for something so serene
just douse your lies down, and use cheap kerosene
burn the memories too, cause they're haunting me
life's one big battle field, and we're waging wars
but what the hell are we fighting for?
but what the hell have i been fighting for?

oh, well darling
i loved the way you loved me
and it was nothing but sincerity
when you held my hands and kissed me
and sarcasm's a damn good thing

sink deep down under
sweet, sweet morphine
i mistook it all for something so serene
just douse your lies down and use cheap kerosene
burn the memories too, cause they're haunting me


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heybbylovee answered Tuesday April 1 2008, 6:33 pm:
wow.

"burn the memories, too, cause they're haunting me"

i'd get rid of the 'cause'

but i guess i'd have to hear it in order to appreciate it.

it's very good though. wow.

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