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Review on my lyrics?
I created these lyrics, and I need a good review. Didn't know who else to ask, so I'm asking Advicenators. =) I just need a really honest review of it. Thanks XD
So let go, don’t let me bring you down
You’re better at this game,
You throw the punches, I take the hits
This is the very last time you’ll ever clench a fist
If I could bring it back to life,
Trust me, I would
But who’s to trust here?
I wouldn’t stop this if I could
Don’t think we’ll ever be the same,
The evidence still leaves a stain
[Chorus]
Because heroes save the day,
But trust me, I’m no hero
And there’s nothing left to say
Just do whatever it takes to keep yourself sane
This is no time for cat and mouse,
You know you’re better at this game
I’ll never find out how the story ends,
It stops here, does it really stop here?
I wouldn’t do this if not with a reason,
So get back on that stage,
Something in the script has finally changed,
You can’t miss the part where I walk away
[Chorus]
Because heroes save the day,
But trust me, I’m no hero
And there’s nothing left to say
Just do whatever it takes to keep yourself sane
It’d be a shame to forget to say this…
You’ve gotta show them what it really feels like
It’d be a shame to forget to say this…
You’ve gotta show them what it really feels like
(Getting out before they find the ending…
Just don’t forget that you’ve got nothing left to find)
[Chorus]
Because heroes save the day,
But trust me, I’m no hero
And there’s nothing left to say
Just do whatever it takes to keep yourself sane
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I really like your lyrics :)
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Personnelly, i think they're great lyrics. you're very talented at writing. and im not just saying i like them bcuz if i didnt like them, i wudnt have answered lol. well anyways i think they're awesome lyrics and you should keep writing more =D!.
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