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should i tell her how I feel
Should i send this to the girl i really like. she has been sending me the most confusing signals possible!
" , I hope what I can write here will clear things up a bit. I apologize for causing distress. I am to much of a character to not rip apart the people I wish to do only good for. But there are things I do I regret, and actions I take which I don’t know why. All I want is you. for all your amazing personality traits and amazing attributes. There is nothing I think I can do to win your love. Nothing would feel right around you. ther is always this qua-zay odd feeling. One of those people who I don’t hug when we depart, yet the one who I would love to embrace for an eternity. Why is there such distance. I kno I say things I barely mean, and even make you wonder about how much you really are attracted to me. Because I get confused between love of the person and desire. I want all that you provide, and I have no good means of obtaining it. I think that if the feeling of attraction was equal you may be willing to help me get through the rough patches. If this is true, how do I bring them about. How can I get it so there is no uneasiness between us. No need to hide my emotions. And no need to draw them out. I can provide almost everything you ask of me. Just ask. I already inquired about your actions but I don’t understand your answers. Why hold back when it comes to me. What have I done to receive such treatment? What do I strike you as. Do you really think this way? Why not openly talk about this. And just accept the truth of the answer. "
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well first thing I notices was if you do send it capatalize the f in for all your... ther has two e's in ther is always this qua-zay also capatalize that. And qua-zay? I dont know if you want to put that, but by all means. I kno= I know in I kno I say things. You cant say I know I say things I BARELY mean that doesnt make sense. How do I bring them out is a question. How can I get it? That also needs to be rephrased. "There is" no need to hide emotions. Why hold back is also a question. what do I strike you as- also a question. why not openly talk about this -also a question.
Well I am quite confused. But I dont know the history behind it, so I cant judge. But read through it and see if it makes sense to you, you'll probably catch more of those errors.
If I were you, I wouldnt send that email. I think that you should make paragraphs and explain it better. Like when you are writing, even if you know your audience, you should pretend that they are complete idiots who have absoulutlyy no idea what youre talking about. Paraphrase and give examples. Drop alittle bit of the desire parts and add alittle bit of the cute sensible guy I can see is there. If you write and tell her you're deeply in love with her and you cant see why shes not speaking to you or something then you'll scare her away buddy.
I'm glad you're putting everything out in the open, but I think that you need to read through it a bit and make sure thats the letter you want to send, because once its sent its sent. And you cant get it back. If you want that to be said make sure thats how you wnat it put. there are a million ways to write the same letter if thats the perfect one in a million thats good but if its not then find one of the other ways.
I wouldnt come on so strong but thats okay, because I'm not you.
I have one more question. Are you asking her out, or asking her to marry you? Are you sure that you want to tell her: "... I don’t hug when we depart, yet the one who I would love to embrace for an eternity." eternity?
You're a great writer, but I dont know if you wnat to come on so strong.
But this is up to you. You have to press send so is that what you want. If it is and youre happy with it, nothing I say will help.
I hope I helpped you, and I hope the editing didnt offend you or anything :). Good luck with this girl she sounds amazing! And I hope it really works out, you sound liek a great guy and her perfect match hopefully.
Let me know how it goes. love ya,
angie91
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awww. yes, i think you should. if a guy gives me that, i would probably cry. it's sweet. i think she would love it. i know i did. and if things doesn't go your way with her, just know you tried. that's all you can really do.
good luck!
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