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Poem
Hey yall i wrote a poem and i dont know if its good or not.. in need your advice......
Blood!
Blood is a 5 letter word
Blood starts with b
The b stands for broken
The broken girl watched the blood roll down her wrist
Blood!
L is the second deadly letter in blood
L stands for life
The girl watched her life slip away
Blood!
O is the third unlucky letter in blood
O stands for open
The girl opened her mouth to utter her last word that she will ever say
Blood!
O is forth tragic letter in blood
O stands for off
The girl turned the lights off so she could die in the dark.
Blood!
D is the final and most scary letter of all the letters in blood.
D stands for die
The girl dies in her room, alone and scared
Blood!
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