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Would you listen to this song?
Well i worte this for my band and were playing at a party in a week im singing (my first time singing infront of an audience) and i was just wondering if anyone would listen to this song and has any advice for a first time singer?
myself a kaleidoscope of thoughts
that never set me free
existence without creation
is this how life should be?
shadows without light
victory without a fight
professionaly created frozen
you have waited
for your iner senses to
wake insde your cells
form this dead and lifeless shell
silent images of poetic light
voiceless screams of the ecliptic night encrypting truth witin its lies
your heaven is satanic poetry
Chorus:seas of blood eb and dwell
on paradises shores
this world full of emptiness and ignorance
no one can see beyond life and time
my feelings are no longer mine
i gave you everything you wanted
you gave me nothing in return
set my heart on fire
left me there to burn
never f*cking cared at all
bled my soul to death
try to catch my tears from falling
took my final breath
our webs grow even tighter
and our blood grow even brighter
with every passing day
Verse 2:nothing left to say
throw my lifeless words away
rope of promises broken
wraps around my neck
one false move and
im on the floor again
my hopes are dashed
and i weep with eupohirc joy
i am proud to be this far from you
in between life and death
there is love
above
black and white there is gray
beneath the ashes embers
of our dying love still burn
this hailstorm of tears cuts us into pieces
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