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well im one of the ppl who has an advice column ( babyxtx09 ) and i wrote this poem and its the first one ive written in like 8 months so im kinda rusty but i wanted to know wut ppl think of it..
Why do these emotions keep reoccuring?
All these feelings I have for you seem enduring
I thought I'd put them aside and they were through
But it seems as if my heart disagrees and I don't know what to do
Why can't I tell you up front and out right?
I feel like such a coward, try as hard as I might
I don't understand why it's with you that I feel this bond
Or why you're the one of which I'm so fond
If only there was a way I could get through to you to believe
Just how much you truly mean to me
But I know I can't because you're too afraid to look
You don't want to accept it's my heart you somehow took
But if you ever need me you know I'll be there
Cause someone like you in my life is truly rare
And if ever down the road you have feelings for me too
Just look ahead and you'll find me waiting for you
For it's within you, I've bestowed my trust with no fear
And that's the type of love, that never dissapears
k be truthful too!! lol i want honest opinions! thanks!
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wow thats really good!! i like it a lot, you did good getting the lines to rhyme, i suck at that, lol but yeah its really good i loved it
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