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my poem
hey derfel u comented on my poem u said it was utterly terrible i would like to see something written by u, u say i try to be a poet, i never wanted to b its just a way i let out pain u say read shakespear I DONT WANT TO B LIKE SHAKESPEAR! shakespear means shit to me! im expressing my feelings in MY way not urs or any1 elses i read poems and write them the way i like im original and un conventional just becus i write differently doesnt mean i dont write well every1 else liked it and i am very open to critism but wen the arguement makes no sense then i dont see y i should put up with it. i think u should try to look at sum les orthodox stuff but w/e dont criticize my poems wen every1 else likes them and u have no point.
*fran
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Hi fran,
Can I just begin by saying it's not because your poems are different of unconventional I say you don't write well - its just the simple fact that your poetry is dreadful !
I could of course write an essay explaining the errors of your writing but you sum everything about your self up very nicely for me. The fact that you have the Audacity and ignorance to make the comments you do about the worlds greatest writer ever (Shakespeare) tells me you do not read or understand his work - then you stand up and shout out that you are a poet. You are not and never will be a poet because - to tell you the truth your to down right stupid. Your as thick as the day is long. AND to make matters worse you can not even spell the mans name correctly - it has an E at the end - Shakespeare, you stupid individual. You say your poems are a way of you letting out your pain, well their painful to read that's for certain.
I do hope one day you will be able to look at the 'poems' you have writen to date and have the Knowledge and understanding to feel very embarrassed you wrote them and had this confrontation with me, but I doubt it.
As you will notice I have not included any of my poems and that is not because I do not have confidence in them, if you read the last part of my previous response you'll know why; and unlike you I have to keep to publishers terms and conditions.
Pleas feel free to respond. Good day to you, you child.
Derfel
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