I'm a brown head hazel eyed girl! Sorry guys im taken! I hope you like my answers! Aim:piggiessaymoo
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I thought you would be the person to let me know that it is ok to be able to trust people , to let them know how you feel.
I thought you could show me how it feels to have someone who really cares about me.
I thought I could depend on you to always be there for me.
I thought you really cared about me.
I thought you really wanted to be with me.
I never thought you would be the person to hurt me.
I never had a thought you and I would never be together.
I always thought you were going to be there when I need you.
I never thought any one could hurt me as bad as you did.
I would have dreams of me and you being together till death did us part.
I never thought you would cheat on me like you did with other gurlz
I never thought u could ever lie to me.
I never thought the worse could happen between us but the worse has yet to come.
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Ya, I think it's great. Good job! Thanx!
~Chelsea~
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Everythings set
No ones home
Liquid on me like a net
Making this dome
Im not turning back
This worlds just not for me
Im starting to pack
I know you wish I could see
This river makes a maze
Up towards me
Im so afraid of this blaze
It flickers in the dark
I dont want to let it go
On my fingers its leaving a mark
But its ok because no one will know
Its falling
I close my eyes
I hear my mom calling
I realize i dont want to say good-bye
I jump up and run so fast
Flames
They all pass
Im almost to the door
But its to late
I fall to the floor
I dont want this to be my fate
I screamed so loud
My bodies burning
Wraping around me like an orange cloud
My skin is turning
I stop breathing
I am almost gone
My bodies seething
My brain stops
Its all over
I finished the plan
My ashes they'll keep in a golden pan
And everyone will see
They'll know i commited a sin
They thought it could never be
I tried, but the flames, they always win
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Whoa...... that's really cool, yet scary at the same time. If you have ne more poems plz share them with me. Thanx.
~Chelsea~
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ok i dunno if i like this poem i wrote can you guys help me
Checking my pulse:
checking my pulse
trying to see if i'm alive
as i lay here
me sweat making my hair stick to my face
my heart pounding
my stomach spinning
checking my pulse
becuase i just told you
how i feel
i feel as if i've been lifted away
into a world unknown to me
into a world lead by you
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Wow, that was good. It's like how I felt when I think of my boyfriend. Thanx for sharing your poem with me!
~Chelsea~
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I'm not sure i got this poem sounding right; anyone please gimme a hand.
Fallen Hero
I looked up to a figure
I once deemed to be the best.
But as time slipped to the second,
My faith was put to the test.
Me hero was declined
Of his powerful throne,
Shoved to the side
And deprived of all he called his own.
I stood with the disappointed
Who late looked him on,
And surprisingly found myself
Not nearly as drawn.
As I turned my back,
Shaking my head,
He uttered his final words
And the next second he’s dead.
I found myself thinking twice
Of what I had once thought.
After hearing his words,
My attention, he begot.
“Take care of your hate,
“For soon you’ll regret
“For not helping the one
“To whom your actions were once set.
“Don’t be afraid of difference-
“That’s what makes us all unique.
“If we copied and begged sameness,
“Then all would be bleak.
“Cherish what you believe
“And this is the last I have to say:
“Don’t turn your back again
Like you’d done today.”
**!~Denice~!** (link)
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Congrats to the poet! I give you a 10. It seems like you worked really hard on that poem. I'm glad that you have a sensitive side in your heart. I hope you like my answer.
~Chelsea~
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