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Ok so for english we had to write a poem on loves and losses and i wrote this one. Please give me your honest answer on everything and if you have any ideas on how to make it better thanks!

I love you now,
I lost you yet,
I will always be here.
Don’t you fret

I know it hurts
But life goes on
I will try not to listen
To those sappy love songs,

Cause when I do,
I think of you
And what we used to be,
I just wish you would see

I gave you everything,
Yet you pushed me away,
I promise I will miss you,
Every single day

Me and you,
We can find a way,
And maybe…just maybe
We can be together someday.

I think it's lovley and very personal.
If you want to gain more persepective from other people, just like yourself , visit
www.allpoetry.com - I'm a member on their and it's a great place to write and see what other people's take on it are!
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I hope your teacher likes it

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(Rating: 5) Thanks so much! =]
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