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So I'm doing an essay on a "soldier's experience". In the introductory paragraph I have to give a Hook, Background Info, and a Thesis Statement. This is my thesis: War is a lifechanging experience -- for the bad. Does anybody have any ideas for a hook? And also.. for the background info part it's kind of where your opinion about war goes. So what is all of your guys opinino about war? Thank youuu

There is always a more peaceful way of solving something that doesn't have to be quite as barbaric. God did not put us on this Earth so we can solve our problems by seeing which country can kill the most people and causing grief in families and/or friends. Life is a gift we cherish, not try to help it disappear. War is not only a life-changing experience, but it is a life-taking experience as well. The world is a crazy place, but if War is what we have to do to save our country and its people, it will be done. What happens, happens. Everything meant to be, will be. We will see the ones we love in Heaven if we follow God's laws.


((However, this essay is supposed to be based on YOUR OPINION. So please, if you agree with mine, don't take it word for word. Re-word it.))

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