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Does this peom sound to lovey dovey? (be honset)
will be there for you
When you fall
When you cry
When you think life has no meaning
Where ever I am
Where ever you are
Who ever you are with
Who ever I am with
I will still think of you
I will protect you
I will help you
I always have your back
Because you are my friend,
I love you forever…
i wrote this to my best friend that i know for 8 years and i like her more than a friend.
i told that i had feelings for her. and she said she not ready for a realtionship right now and she not sure what gender she is intersed into.
but my guy friend called me and that he told her how he felt about her. he said that he like her but wants to be friends. she reasponed "well Tammy played a song for me that is repeteing over my head about friends" (im tammy) well i try to remember what song i played for her.....but i never played a song for her. i wrote that poem for her after i told her how i felt about her. was she qouating the peom? is she repeteing that over and over her head???? (link)
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In all honesty,that poem's really cliche and poorly written. If someone gave that to me I would realize that it was with their best intentions,but I would also wonder why they wouldn't take the time to write a decent poem for me.
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Rating: 2
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SORRY i am not asking how the peom is writen well or not. okay, it was a peom thats it why dont you answer the question and not correct whats wrong with it okay. BAD ADVICE
Rating changed by L2 mod.
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