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Any Thoughts on this song?
Before you judge me, Ive had a hard life..And i dont think you need or care to know about who i wrote this for..I would like to know if it is a good song or not...theres no title yet.
youll be sorry.
about what you have done to me...
one day, your gonna regret doing it all.
your gonna try to apoligize,
and let me tell you..
it will be too late.
you try to tell me i control you and i know i dont
and everyone else thinks your crazy, sweetie,
dont give me lip, your makin yourself look foolish,
and by now you should know it..
but its pretty obvious your oblivious to the whole situation.
you tell me to forget and if you think i can then your stupid
you cant ever forget, maybe forgive but thats it, thats all.
its just how it goes, i guess.
and its not even funny that you cant admit that your wrong,
its sickening and i dont care what ANYONE says im done with you
and your damn child games, im not playing anymore,
and no, its not a forfit.
its me being the bigger person, even though ive been trampled on plenty of times.
one day, your gonna regret doing it all,
your gonna try to apoligize,
and let me tell you,
it will be too late.
maybe, just maybe youll wake up sometime and REALIZE what youve done to hurt me,
but most of how youve contributed to my personality,
youve left me here, youve kicked me out,
i dont even want to deal with you any more...
youve done so much to hurt me and its not even worth writing about anymore
i want you out the door hunny,
you can get out right now...
im DONE with you and your stupid games get outta my life
and well talk when you change.
one day, your gonna regret doing it all,
your gonna try to apoligize,
and let me tell you,
it will be too late.
too damn late.[fade out]
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We don't normally do song reviews/poem reviews and such, but I read that, and I honestly felt your emotion.
Although it's obviously supposed to be mean [I didn't say that was wrong], it is good because I FEEL your pain. I think you could seriously have a career in poetry/song writing, because that was good.
--Jack
(16/m)
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