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Song
I made up a song like just the words and a couple of notes but could y'all tell me if it's any good?
Thanks in advance
Stomp on my dreams,
Breakin' my heart.
As strange as it seems,
You're tearin' me apart.
You were all of my world,
Everything I had,
If you want to live happily ever after,
Well that's too bad.
You were my one,
And my only.
I lost you and,
Now I'm so lonely.
What use is there in cryin'?
For now, I'm still denyin'
I'm walkin' alone,
Down this empty street.
I felt so strong,
Now I feel so weak.
From the beginning of time,
To the end of forever,
You’ll always come to mind,
Forever and ever.
You were my one,
And my only.
I lost you and,
Now I'm so lonely.
What use is there in cryin'?
For now, I'm still denyin'
I’m not just a toy!
I have feelings too.
I gave you my heart,
And you broke it in two.
I’m hurting so bad,
I can’t put it in words.
All the things that I heard,
It makes me mad.
What happened to my one,
And only?
I lost you and
Feel worse than lonely.
What use is there in crying?
Because I’m done denying,
That you, will, never, love, me too.
^^That's my song!
Anyway thanks again!
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