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writing a peom for my girlfriend


Question Posted Tuesday November 22 2005, 10:21 am

hi me and my friend are writing a peoms for my girlfriend can you review them and say which one is better:

MY FRENDS
i walk down street
monkeys in pyjamas
bite ur hands and feet

MINE
feed the hands that u bite
pyjamas are actually part time monkeys
in secret street parade at night
i love you darling

yor assitant is greatly apprecated :)

jason aka notTiboI

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xt answered Tuesday November 22 2005, 11:07 am:
jason,

you see, i WOULD be able to tell you whose poem is better, if only i could COMPREHEND what your poems mean. tough luck. gotta attend some literature lessons, wotcher. lots to learn.

luv, xt :)

p.s. i hope your girlfriend hasn't dumped you yet.

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