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Question Posted Thursday July 22 2004, 3:45 pm

This red scary night
He came home and began another fight

I hear mommy's cries
Because of all daddies lies

She pushes me aside
And tells me to hide

I run to my room under my bed
And i cover my head

I hear mommy scream
As daddy's fists beam

I see mommy hit the ground
I close my eyes and try to get rid of al this sound

She just lies there
Blood comes down as i stare

I start to cry
I heard him walk by

I wished he would'nt find me laying under my bed
As I stared at mommy lying there dead

But he did
And asked my why I hid

I looked in his cold eyes and said
That I was just looking for something under my bed

He said alright
Then left my sight

I touched her with a sigh
And slowly started to cry

Then a suuden pull
His fists were full

I felt my face sink in
I knew he would win

My tiny arms
Would'nt even harm

His last blow
Stopped my hearts flow

There mommy and I were
It was all such a blur

I could'nt understand why
Daddy had to make us die



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