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Q: Emotions

I feel as if i'm outside myself watching life. It feels so stange, like a cat in new land.
YOu think I have no emotion, then you don't know me. If you could understand me, just listen you can hear my thoughts. The volume is always hight never quiet.
my smile is automatic, like a machine programed.
I want to tell you more, I want you to understand.
I don't know who I am. Too many voices. too many emotions.
I feel so lost! No one understands. I'm so insecure just waiting for your secure.
I reach out, I yell but my arms don't move not a sound escapes my mouth.
I'm so alone, So many voices, so many emotions....
Copyright ©2004 Kathleen Janette Bare

Is this a good poem? Let me know. I just wrote it.
I thynk it's okay. I thynk yew could use more descriptions tho! It also seemz as if ur trying a little too hard to be deep lyke those poems that make you think or feel srry for yew. I'm just bein' honest.

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