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I don't really know if this fits in this category, but I'm writing a story that I hope to turn into a movie fairly soon. I don't have a full story line for some of these yet, but tell me what you would be most interested in. Also, let me know if they're too sad. I'm really better at comedy, but I just thought I'd take a shot at drama for a change.

A. A story about a boy and a girl who fall in love after being introduced to each other by their fathers, who are old friends. Their relationship gets serious, even though the girl's father doesnt approve and feels akward about the situation. Then, the boy is involved in a car accident and taken to the hospital. The next day, the girl goes to visit him and sees that other than some cuts and bruises, he seems fine. Shortly after she gets home, her roommate tells her that she's just heard that the boy had just died from internal bleeding. I don't know the rest of the story, but it will involve the girl's family helping the boy's family deal with the agony of losing their son and it will have some kind of lesson about love and friendship.

B. A story about a man whose wife is murdered and his infant son is kidnapped from their house one night when he was gone for a very short amount of time. The man spends twelve years looking for his son and after he discovers that the man who stole his son passed him off as a child put up for adoption, he goes looking for the couple who adopted him. Then, he must choose between bringing his son home or allowing him to stay with the adopted parents who raised him.

C. A story about a man with a wife, a daughter, and a son who are involved in an accident together and taken to the emergency room. The daughter dies, the wife is declared brain dead, and the son is near death from damage done to his heart. The man gets to the hospital and the doctors tell him that they want to take his wife off of life support so they can give their son her heart. The man doesn't want to let her go, but if he doesn't, he will lose the only member of his family with a chance of survival and he has only minutes to make the decision.

Wow, you are really good at this! I would be most interested in B. Oh and not that your story lines are bad, but you should remember that drama doesn't always have deaths in them. It could be a family secret, and someone on the outside might know it. It could be a tangled love triangle. It could also be a very well known family have a surrogate mother. Oh and remember that coincidences are not always good!! Oh and don't forget that drama is not always sad, it could start out funny and as the story progresses the plot thickens making a transition in the story! For C. I suggest that you should portray a back story to the family and how the parents met. That will really show the relationships in the family and the agony of being a husband and father. Its up to you how the story progresses. Since you are good at comedy really intertwine your skill into your stories, you should always know you strengths and weaknesses.For A. When. Writing the scene in the hospital,( you don't need to follow my advice) maybe hint that the boy already knows hes going to die, but doesn't want to tell the girl he loves that. So instead he.gives her false hope. In your story lines remember that the portraying relationships, really helps the reader or watcher, what the character is really feeling. Their emotions and the cause of it. Hope this helps!! Good luck, I would love to see these story lines grow into a production!!

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For the last week or so I've been having minor stomach aches pretty much all day but I've been ignoring them as they almost seem to go away if I do. This morning I woke up and I felt like I was having really terrible menstrual cramps but it's not that time of the month and the cramp like pain went away after I got up and moved around.

I felt nauseous on and off today but after I ate dinner I started having weird pains towards the lower right side of my body like farther over than where my stomach would be. It's really starting to bother me today,sometimes it gets bad enough that I actually cringe.

My brother got CDIFF from being in the hospital and I'm starting to wonder if I didn't get it from him when I was visiting but the kind he had made him have diarrhea and the like and I'm not having that problem. I know CDIFF doesn't go away without antibiotics but I don't want to say anything to my mom about it because she's a hypochondriac and she's going to start freaking out and thinking she has it too or get mad that I think I have it and say I'm faking or overreacting (she tends to get irritated when other people think they're sick,like she thinks she's the only one who can ever get sick if that makes sense).

I haven't had any diet or activity changes.

What are some other possibilities?
Should I give it another week and see if it just goes away,could it just be some weird virus or something?

It might be your appendix, some people have some kind of thing with it. I forgot. I might not be much help buuut, Some people get their appendix removed too. Since they had some kind of problem with it. It could also be any other problem with your organs, close to the stomach area. You should probably get it checked out by a doctor. Hope this helps! Good Luck and be sure to get well soon!!

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So my bf moved to another state and we want to be able to webcam to each other through our phones but we have no idea what we are doing I guess. We tried skype and it's really stupid but maybe we are doing it wrong. We both have android phones. What are some apps that we can use to achieve this?

PS. IP Webcam doesn't work either.

Um, you guys should try using your emails! They have apps out there, where you can video chat and stuff with other people. The only ones I know of are gmail and yahoo. The apps for them are compatible with android phones too! Good luck!

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