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Ok so I am a well known author and I will not tell you who I am obviously, but I need some amateur writers ideas. Im about to write a new novel and I need a good topic. Ive been thinking about writing about either a tragedy/ natural disaster or I could write about finding true love. I love either topic but Im at a loss for words. I do not know how to start or what should be my plot and setting and stuff like that. So, I would love some ideas from great amateur writers and in return if I like the ideas I will mention your name in my book so if you give me a reply please state your first name and your age. Thank you all alot and I will enjoy reading your suggestions. (link)
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I don't know who you are, or if you'll even write this (let alone if I'll ever find out) but my friend gave me this idea for a story and I tried really hard but I couldn't finish it. I got a plot, and a beginning, and then it just sat in a folder unused. It made me sad, so hopefully this can get it to be finished, and not just wasting away, only partially written while I'm working on my current novel...
My name and age: Emilie (my friends call me "Emi) and I'm 18 years of age. I also give you permission to make changes, hopefully not too many if you use the story, and would also much appreciate some how being let known if you do decide to use it. I would really like to read this book, it's just sad that I can't get it written myself.
You can do the story just from "the idea", but since you said you're having issue with your plot and getting started as well I'm going to type up what I have, and cross my fingers that I'll get to see what comes up of it if anything. But a quick note: the grammar and writing isn't the best because I just jotted some stuff down fast and then I go back over it with corrections....
So here goes ----
The title: "Half Breed"
The idea: teenage punk half faerie, half demon girl loses her faerie mother and demon father to an angry demon ex-girlfriend of her father's and has to raise herself. She has a hard exterior but all she wants to do is be loved by the cute lipstick lesbian new girl she meets in GBLT (Gay Bisexual Lesbian Transgender) club she goes to every day.
Characters:
Stardust Willow; blonde, blue eyes, waist-long hair, colourful wings, long white flowing dress, mother, faerie, tan skin, no make up
David Storm; black hair, red eyes, pale skin, shoulder-length hair, right eyebrow pierced three times, star tattoo on neck, father, demon
Sapphire Willow-Storm; Black waist-long hair with blonde tips (naturally), she dyes the blonde tips different colours using temporary hair dye every day, purple eyes, pale skin, no wings, [piercings: tongue, lower lip on each side ("spider bites"), and right nostril], seventeen, senior in high school, star tattoo on right wrist, daughter, half and half, wears purple lipstick and black make up
Cady; "Crazy Cady", short fiery red hair, covered in tattoos and piercings, demon, the ex girlfriend
Trinity Zenago: Brown eyes, brown shoulder length hair, human, senior at high school, seventeen, the new girl, pink lip gloss/pink make up
"Crazy Cady" shoots Stardust and David while Sapphire is hiding under the couch and is unseen, she crawls out and calls her faerie grandfather, the only one in the family who doesn't resent Stardust and David for their relationship, to help her and take care of the bodies (telling her they're have a private funeral). Her grandfather lets her stay home from school (human school) to mourn, and calls her in ill.
The next day she goes to school and meets Trinity, who needed to get more school credits and had to join a club, so she joined GBLT club.
GBLT is everyday after school, but clubs are supposed to just meet once a week after school so Mon-Thurs is for the members to socialise and be themselves (but not required to be there, it's optional) and Fridays are the required club meetings.
Sapphire and Trinity stay every day and after talking for awhile, decide to go on a date (movies and snack's at Sapphires's). They kiss.
Grandfather checks up on Sapphire every here and there --- but doesn't live with her.
Trinity goes with to the funeral, after funeral they talk about Sapphire's heritage. Trinity gets frightened, especially by the word "demon" used, and stops going to GBLT. Grandfather consoles Sapphire that she'll come around, and eventually he is proven correct.
What I managed to jot down:
"Quick, hide under the couch." Dad ordered under his breath.
I didn't question it, I knew that tone. I lifted the flap and crawled under the raised couch army-style.
Suddenly there was angry pounding on the door.
Dad's heavy footsteps went towards the front door and opened it.
"You MARRIED her?!" an angry woman yells.
"Crazy Cady," I barely heard my mother's whisper say.
"I can't believe you married a fucking faerie! And not only that, what's this I hear about you having a half breed brat?" she continued to fume.
"Calm down, Cady." My dad tried to soothe.
"David, how could you? I loved you! And I'm a demon, like you! And not only did you leave me, you're with a faerie and having a family on Earth! You traitor! You betrayed your demon ancestors. You tainted your own family blood!"
"I don't care about any of that, Cady. Don't you get it? I love Stardust, can't you see that?"
"But David," she whined, "I love you."
I lifted the flap to see what was happening, and see who Cady was. I saw an angry woman with short fiery red hair, covered in tattoos and piercings, with her hands on her hips.
Dad watched her with his calm red eyes, his shoulder length black hair covered his single tattoo of a star on the nape of his neck which matched the one on the inside of my right wrist.
Mum tried to keep her distance in her long flowing white dress, her colourful wings perked in fear --- ready to fly away at any second. She was clutching her blonde hair, waist long like mine, and watched dad and Cady with wide frightened blue eyes.
Then I saw it; a gun holster on her ankle. She reached for it and I saw dad's eyebrow twitch as he knew he couldn't do anything.
She pointed it right at him and squeezed the trigger as I squeezed my eyes shut. BANG!
Tears streamed from my eyes, but I kept quiet.
"It appears we're alone, now," Cady grinned at my mother.
"Please, don't do this." Mum whispered.
"I have to, now. You wanted to be together. Now you can be DEAD together. 'Till death do you part!" BANG!
More tears soaked the carpet.
"It's okay, you can come out now," She was looking right at me. "I won't hurt you, come, let's talk."
I refused. I didn't move.
She knelt in front of the couch, "your daddy and mummy were foolish. But you haven't don't anything wrong... Yet. I'm sorry you had to see that, I truly am, but I had to do it. I didn't wish for you to have to see that, I'm sorry." Then she got up and left, leaving my parents on the floor behind.
When she was gone, I climbed out and just cried until I ran out of tears.
Good luck with your writings [what ever book you choose to make] author with out a name.
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Thanks i will inbox you when im finished
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