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Ok so i already posted this once but i didnt get as much feedback as i wanted. Please read this and tell me what you think. I had to write it for english it is loves/loses. Thanks in advance!
I love you now,
I lost you yet,
I will always be here.
Don’t you fret
I know it hurts
But life goes on
I will try not to listen
To those sappy love songs,
Cause when I do,
I think of you
And what we used to be,
I just wish you would see
I gave you everything,
Yet you pushed me away,
I promise I will miss you,
Every single day
Me and you,
We can find a way,
And maybe…just maybe
We can be together someday.
wow i wish i could write poetry as good as that!ive actually added this to my favorities!so dont take this down! hehe (not that id steal it jus a good thing to either cry or smile to)its so good!i really hope you get the grade your aiming for and higher! =Dyou got the loves vs losses thing really good =Dwell done!
(Rating: 5) Aww thanks so much! =] Glad you liked it!