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Q: i want to send this ASAP!!

i really want to send an email to my coach because i want to ask her things that i dont get a chance to ask at practices. i have a lot of trouble fixing things i do in games unless i know EXACTLY what im doing wrong and EXACTLY how to fix it. and im pretty shy especially on that team so im having trouble wording this email.

i just want her to know that i want to improve and im going to practice hard, at our practices and on my own, but i need to know specifically what to work on and how to practice it. how do i start off an email like this? how do i say what i want to without sounding like disrespectful or anything?

thank you!
how about something like this...?

Dear Coach ________,
I'm so glad to be on your team. I'm really sorry if my performance hasn't been up to scratch[even if it has... humble is good], and I'd really like to improve. Is there any specific skills I should practice, or drills I should run? I don't want to let my team down, so I'm definately going to practice hard, both with the team, and at home, but I'm not sure which things to work on specifically.
Also, I found out recently that my [condition] is getting better. I was so happy, because I think as it improves, so might my playing. I just wanted to let you know, because as a coach, you've always been a great support both on the [field or court] and off.
Thanks so much
[name]

Thanks very much!

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Rosalina
Hey Peoples...
I'm a Pennsylvania girl plopped right down in the middle of the nowhere, and hating it.
I sing, act, write, read way too much, and I love my girls.
Currently SiNgLe, but I want someone.
I give okay advice, but I won't bullshit to you. If I don't know, I'll tell you straight up. I'm NOT going to sugarcoat answers, and if you rate me down, whatevs. WHO CARES. I'm not here to be the most popular collumnist. I'm here to give advice.
On that note,
Lots of Love
Rose

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