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hey im a good writer and all but im havin trouble writing a poem to my friend. I wrote it out in a paragraph saying
"I've been doing some thinking. This may sound a little akward but I'm sorry I know your right. I guess I haven't been using my head so greatly these past few weeks. I'm happy to finally know I actually have someone who will give me helpful advice and a shoulder to cry on. When I need it. I guess we can thank those summer night chats with out those I guess we really wouldn't have all those memories and inside jokes made.
Thanks for being there for me"
I know if I work for hours I can get it but I can't seem to get it out. Can someone write a poem for me? or should I just leave it as it is and explain that in a paragraph form and not make any changes. I'm not sure what to do... thanks for helping if you do.
(P.S. he writes as well)
After all my thoughts in my head
and all these days, of worring and dread
i realise this whole time you were rite
you were always there to hold me tight
you were there to lift me high
you were there to help me reach the sky
you were there and you have always been true
the only thing i can say now i thank you
you can do write something like this if you want, change it around make it more yous. or leave it that way it is. personally i like the way you have it. please rate! i would really like to know if this poem helped or not
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yeah thanks..i was going to do it in poem form and then have it as in what i wrote to see if he actually understood it so im gonna use both poems and my paragraph and see what happens. thanks for the help! x0x0
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