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Please tell me what you think of the song. It is alternative/pop so please tell me, i need a song for an audition and i might sing this
This is who i am, This is who i wanna be
I can be an eagle soaring through the breeze,
I can be a mermaid swimming in the seas,
But this is who i am, This is who i wanna be,
And i won't change just for you, cuz i need to be me
Chorus
You always look at me like i'm who they say
And trying to tell me to be this way,
Did you ever think i may be too much
to do a certain dance (a certain touch)
This is who i am this is who i wanna be,
I'm not a supermodel,
I'm not your barbie doll,
Don't expect from me
A beautiful fantisy,
Cuz i'm already beautiful,
Inside my soul
But this is who i am, This is who i wanna be
Chorus
Guitar solo
In the mirror is where she comes face to face with her fears
Her own reflections now fatal after all these years,
All of her life she has tried to be something besides herself,
Now she's someone else with regret
Thanks a bunch!
Lizzy (link)
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it's great!!! :D I love it!
however, this part
"I'm not a supermodel,
I'm not your barbie doll,
Don't expect from me
A beautiful fantisy,
Cuz i'm already beautiful,
Inside my soul
But this is who i am, This is who i wanna be"
sounds a little self centered. You don't have to change it, it just kind of bothered me. I hope I gave enough constructive criticism... ^^;;
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Rating: 5
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Thanks a lot. It wasn't supposed to be really self centered it was supposed to make an innerbeauty statemeant. I'll probably change it though
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