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GCSE Course Work Please Grade My Travel Writting!
3 Days Spent in New York City
Outsiders look up, locals look straight. A majestic world of wonder on the eyes, the concrete jungle that is New York City. The three days I spent in New York, the city lit by aspirations and grandeur to inspire people, had left me with three days of wishes granted. The city that never sleeps, according to the song.
The atmosphere invites you to participate in everyday activities. Day one, obligeto call out for a “taxi”, the famous yellow car, the best way of transport to travel from one sight to the next with only a low priced fee. My trip there was like discovering an entirely new way of life that I had only heard stories of. During day one I felt compelled to visit the Statue of Liberty. It is a modern marvel and a national monument that symbolizes independence, friendship and democracy. The national monument allows people to study America’s independent history and provides a remarkable view of the harbour. Day two was devoted towards a more cultural outlook of some of the finest art work in the world, which is on display at the Metropolitan Museum of Art. New York’s Museum is one of the most influential museums in the world. It attracts visitors with it’s display of both modern and contemporary arts, that enable visitors to explore the evolution of arts and culture diversity.
I found that the New York people are providential and were very engaging. They adored to learn all about where you are from and to inculcate with you about some of the history behind New York’s purpose and landmarks.
The Empire State Building is a 102 story skyscraper located in Midtown Manhattan; I decided that I wasn’t prepared to climb the top, although I am told the view of New York’s sunset is so astonishing that it is where couples retreat too. My final visit on day three was to spend some time to wander around the luscious loveliness, which holds fresh air from the oak woodland trees and is home to the bees. Or with the nick name of “the green lungs”, that is Central Park. It held a true beauty aside from the city, it felt different, a place to unwind from the city’s magical madness. Romantic horse drawn carrige ride is not to be missed in the winter, with a snow sence background. Central park had the ability to ensure you wouldn’t dare be anywhere else. I couldn’t miss out the opportunity for some early Christmas shopping, with the Manhattan luxury shopping along the Fifth and Madison Avenues. The unique gifts and desirable store window displays, that draw you in, made shopping feel as if I was in control of everything. With a wealth of restraunts this included dinner in little Italy.
I feel that three days staying in New York satisfied my need for exploration, and hunger for adventure. During the three days I needed no map to guide me through the sights of the city, just a clear and open mind, ready for the unexpected. I came back home with confidence and my heart strings attached to the city that I had once only seen in the old fashion movie “Breakfast at Tiffany’s”, yet that film had only captured the elegance, not the balance between real lives in the city.
To rationalize new York, is something not to be put in words is too be seen and felt. One day I will return with a new outlook and ideas of scepticism to thrive and to fill the city. It is a place I would never feel lost in, I would recommend it for any mind that needs a new captivating moment, available now only in New York City.
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Honestly, this isn't that great.
You've made quite a few spelling errors.
(Here is one correction for one of the tougher ones: Artwork is one word in the context you are using it. There are four other spelling errors, plus an inconsistent use of British English spellings and American English spellings, and some incorrect tenses.)
Many of your sentences are grammatically incorrect and confusing (It's fine to bend the rules of grammar for impact, but not if it simply makes things more confusing and difficult to understand. For the most obvious example, the following is not a complete sentence at all "Or with the nick name of “the green lungs”, that is Central Park.")
So, without knowing what grade you are in, or what expectation your teacher would have, I'd suspect this is a low-B or high-C level work.
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